This poem wasn't bad... But it wasnt the "wonderful" poem I was promised... I bit disappointing, to say the truth. Your poem reminded me of the kind of poems sixth graders write. Rhyming, having a pattern, and predictable. This poem wasn't so great, but it wasn't really bad either.

Your poem is great! The style of the poem is eloquent and melodic, however it still manages to show you the darkness of war. Great Job!

AWESOMENESS! Loved it

this is a pretty terrible poem. no offense. it's basically a summary of the iliad in "poem" form. a real poem goes deeper than summary. try again.

You were right... This poem is great! :)