|Reviews for A Guilty Heart To Hold|
| HihiSherLit 7/25/12 . chapter 1
This poem wasn't bad... But it wasnt the "wonderful" poem I was promised... I bit disappointing, to say the truth. Your poem reminded me of the kind of poems sixth graders write. Rhyming, having a pattern, and predictable. This poem wasn't so great, but it wasn't really bad either.
| bwaaaaaa 3/27/12 . chapter 1
Your poem is great! The style of the poem is eloquent and melodic, however it still manages to show you the darkness of war. Great Job!
| djsrocks 1/21/12 . chapter 1
AWESOMENESS! Loved it
| wait what 12/5/11 . chapter 1
this is a pretty terrible poem. no offense. it's basically a summary of the iliad in "poem" form. a real poem goes deeper than summary. try again.
| BelaLorelei 12/1/11 . chapter 1
You were right... This poem is great! :)