Please...CONTINUE THIS!

too hard, please continue much

I love your fanfiction i would like see the next chapter please

I loved youre story is was really good please update soon

"What the hell did I just read?"

That's my exact feelings right now al-right.

You best explain yourself dear Shirokurou,

In the next chapters that is...

...

This is promising. Thanks

Please continue this!

This is the only Minchi/Ohana fanfic!1

So all Minchi/Ohana fans are waiting and anticipating for chapter 2...and more...so you must continue and finish!

Because I love this fanfic!

Thank you very much. *Bow*

Xenocryst

Hmm, an excellent start. You captured the characters well and I can't wait to see how this whole thing works out. I can see them pairing up. Also, you write really good romance stories in the claymore archive. I really enjoy reading them and I do hope you continue writing them. Your claymore stories have an actual plot to them rather than the average one-shot. I really like that. Sorry, I got off topic for a bit. Anyways, I like the start of this and I think it will turn out well and interesting. Keep writing ;)

Really great start! I hope to hear more from this story soon. Ohana x Minko is such an overlooked pairing, it's good to see someone going for it- and with good writing to boot!

It's an unexpected pairing ! But I like it :)

Your story is great and I'm looking forward to the next chapter

A very promising opening. To my mind you've got Minko down perfect, and Ohana was just silly (in a good way).

As a fan (and probably over-user) of ellipses the line "And stop using "…" it's annoying" cracked me up!

Subscribed, looking forward to more.

That looks cute ! Ohana writing her diary is funny too. Looking foward to the next chapter :)