btw i forgot to tellyou that i love this sroy it was the best fanfic i have ever read ( i read alot of the ). so if you decide to write another one plz e-mail me

roxi is awesome

rebellion

Oh ok, I wasn't going to review at all just because it makes me uncomfortable to make a judgement on others' work as I am even too scared to to write the stories swimming in my head. But, here goes; a little more padding would be nice. You have allot of talking and not much explaining raw emotions. What was Roxie feeling after Patch left her in the kitchen, does Vee know Roxi is an alcoholic - My best friend is and tears me up inside I can't help her, explain why R feels ill every morning, at least you might make some teen drinkers stop and think. By the way full on alcoholics who need it first thing in the morning have the dt's (the shakes, vomiting until alcohol gets in and settles them) Maybe I'm too old for teen fiction or I have actually experienced some of what R is experiencing, a dead dad, rough teens and twenty's and I live with the consequences daily - I also go off tangent and I pad too much...anyway you have made Roxie addictive and its nice to see Patch how he would be in real life. Hey I am only up to chp 7 so let me keep reading already. Good work you have a talent that's for sure. xxoo

I'll be expecting that rewrite, Sammi. :)

I think Noir would be a cool name. Original, ya know? I can't wait to see the remake version!

I like the original or "Rebellion"...they sound really good and I can't wait!

You have a wonderful gift of writing I think you should continue in your writing! This is a really amazing story! SO AWESOME! ;)

I love this story. The concept is really fucking awesome. I think if becca would of wrote hush hush in a sense that Nora was a " take no shit" type of girl the story would have been a lot more intense than it is now although nonetheless I absolutely adore the hush hush saga . Anyways back to your story...I like Roxi, although while reading this chapter I was wondering as to why when Patch confesses to her that he loves her why didn't she just say something as to the affect like " you don't even know me...how can you as that " because Patch just officially met Roxi and for him to even say that out of the blue to her its like why didn't she get defensive about that but instead she gets upset because he mentions pig tails and singing like wow. Sorry for over analyzing your story this is just my way of showing how much I like it :) lol

omg omg omg please continue this story! i love it! so so so so so good! i love your character! please make a sequel!

Ah shit! OMFG i Fricking loooooove this stooory! this is just like me.. kinda. lmfaooo cept imma stoner not a drinker :I BUT THIS IS FRICKING AMAZING!

omfg! Love this shit! so fuckin good! :D

Damn you cliffy! Please update as soon as possible!

Hank's an ass, of course. I'm disappointed that there was no yelling or fighting between Patch and Roxi. But I do feel bad for Roxi. And I'm still mad at Patch...

omg i NEED more 3 i love this Nora/Roxi 3 she's so damn awesome :D

You have got to make more chapters this story is EPIC!