hi i loved this one! i hope you will write more seimaden-stories with zadei and teti, there are so few! i like the language in this story and the way you use words and express the feelings teti have. i think you use a simple but at the same time beautiful language. you dont use to hard word or tries to describe things in a too difficult way.

i hope therell be more zaadi-teti stories.

thanks for this one!

my english is bad i know, but i live in sweden so have mercy on me D

It was not bad at all. But - I have to confes it - I read it first because it was a Seimaden fic. I want more Seimaden fics!

::bounce::

LOVE! Me need to get more Seimaden... But I love this fic! T'is absolutely fantastic!

Cerulean Sky

*gasps* There are so many Zaadei and Tetei fics out already, but I swear that this one was breath-taking. I feel the ice, dude! I FEEL THE ICE! _

I don't usually like 'song fics' because the lyrics tend to be jarring (esp. if you don't like the song or it is well known). However, this is the best Seimaden fic I have read and set a favorite song. I still think the lyrics are a bit jarring, but they are well-used. The writing is wonderful, some of the grammar needs work, but the intense insight into Teteirus is incredible. Wonderful work.

There should be more Seimaden fics in the world. Thanks!

So sad... so beautiful... so perfect... ;_;

Lovely story! Nice imagery and characterizations, to my mind at least, and I haven't read all of the series...LOL. If this is your first effort, then I'll watch eagerly for more from you!

That.. was so beautiful.. i think i'm gonna cry

Lovely! There aren't nearly enough Z/T stories.