THAT WAS THE MOST ROMANTIC FIC THAT I EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE! I HOPE THAT YOU WILL BE ABLE TO WRITE MORE ROMANTIC FICS LIKE THESE! JA NE.

yay!what a great story (ending)! pwease make some sort of sequel or something! pwetty pwease! thank you!

~Asianimegurl

Wow! This chapter was fantatsic! And you said you couldn't write lemon! I knew you had the spirit of lemoness inside of you somewhere!
Anyhow this chaptrer was great! It was much better thenany of the other chapters you've written! Go you!

It was really cute!!!!!!
I just love this story.

real cool add more action!

Hey girl dont let those stupid bastards get to you, you are a cool writer and i love your storys what do they know! They are just jelouse cause your probley a better writer than them. Dont listen to them i think your story ROCKS and if no one else likes it you know what that is? TUFF cause we like it dont we people? screw them as long as most of us tell you its good and you know it is too then thats all that matters ok see you and update soon ok love ya story bye bye

YEAH! You go Kirsten! *roots* I am rooting for you! ^^ hehehehe (You know what? I just figured out I think you're a better writer than me, but you know what? That's ok! ^^ Go you!) *giggles insanely and runs around in a deformed square more commonly known as a circle* BWEHEHEHEHEHEHEH!

Don't listen to flamers, their enothing but jealous bastards and taking your fic down will only give them what they want.
My advice is to write a reeaaally big Marron bashing chapter.I get flames all the time because I happen to be anti Trunks/Pan and Trunks/Marron.
In my starnge mind Pan belongs with Vegeta and Trunks belongs with Goten.

Don't listen to people, hon, the people who flame have probably never written a fic in their lives and if they have it's probably really dodgy and shonkey.

The good fanfiction authors never flame.

Hey zup?
dis ** be tight.
keep doin such good work
on dis aight?
cya
BlackPanther
"BP" HELL YEA

This chappie was funny! especially when Veggie-head saw Bulma naked...

I take long showers too.

She's drying herself w/ a hair dryer! *LOL*

Hey Gal! This was a fantastic chapter...You shoudl write a little more V/B action into it. Not lemon stuff but some cute 'banter'.

Oh by the way I have finally posted this at my website, it's in the lemon/romance section if you want to take a look at it ^_^

Good work!

kewl an funny

Good chapter! I'm going to have to put this up on my site soon! In my opinion this one is your best, best, best fanfic! Keep it up!
-Lena

awww! that ending was cute! I mean, I wish Bulma hadn't fallen unconscious, but veggie was so sweet!
I hope he's like that with me.... ^_^

Update soon!