Come back and write some more please. You can't leave me hanging.

oh please please please please post more! Lucas can't die! *pleading eyes* you cant leave it like that!... BTW, i think i really like this, very good writing!...more...?

This is quite good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Please continue and soon. If you could differentiate between the seaQuest and the girl's part, maybe with some asterisks, I would appreciate it. Keep up the good work. I loves me some Lucas!