it was so cute...

This is quite good. You may have gained a fan...

This was really sweet and well realised. It felt very realistic and interesting. Cheers.

wow...that's nice. i'd never write like that..;p...read my storie, the 'excuse me' one and gimme your opinion ok? aniway, update soon and keep up the good work

I really hope that you'll keep writing on this fic. It's really good.

Very interesting. I usually don't ship H/D, but this was very good, well thought out. I like the detail that I saw :) Keep Writing!