i really like the little pome you wrote and the end very cute ]

I'm loving your story sooo much:)

Update Soon!

Wow...I loved this. I love how James is so sweet to Ruby and I love their relationship. This was an amazing story(:

Aww I love Carphanie! I really like that you gave us some insight about Stepanie's father, and you just write Carlos so sweetly. This was a little sad, but I'll love it either way(:

Dear James,

I'm glad you're helping your girlfriend :) Ruby's prbably happy for you too ;)

Love you (not like that though)

Maisie xo

Dear Ruby, I haven'tknown you for a while now, but I can tell you have an awesome relationship with James :) Best Wishes for you guys,

Maisie xo

Dear Steph,

I can NOT believe your dad made you do that! I'm hurting for you!

Love Carlos with all your heart luv, and prove Daddy wrong!

Maisie xo

Dear Carlitos,

Her father had NO RIGHT to do that! Ummm... don't have anything else to say, except it wasn't her fault.

Maisie :(

Dear Jo,

Okay hun,

Kendall didn't mean it! I'm sure he di...okay maybe I'm not too sure, but babe, just remember that I'm looking out for you! You're like a big sister or my cousin! Love ya..

Maisie xo

Hey Kendall,

CHASE HER DUDE! :)

Maisie

I heart u soo much. Thank u for making the sequel...I'm such a sucker for Lomille. I love them together. I feel sad about Carphanie and James and Ruby but hopefully they'll get back together on the sequel. Can't wait!

Once again u have left me in tears. Has that been your plan all along today? LOL jk but still. I'm sorry Lomille and I'm sorry Carphanie but this just beats you both!

I mean wow. Ruby and James were just too sweet. This just really got me. The way she tried to stay strong but in the end couldn't just broke my heart. It was like I was right there watching this all unfold and begging them to stay together.

Great story sweetness and I can't wait for the sequel

Aww I'm sad that this is over but I loved it. I loved seeing James' soft spots and how he was always there for Ruby. You do an amazing job of portraying the character's emotions by making them seem so real. I felt like crying and I don't even know why. I loved this though and I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Carphanie! I miss reading carphanie stories!:D. I love this chapter! Itsso sweet and adorable:)) and your Authors note was awesome!:D hahhaha!:D

Amazing, heart felt chapter. I loved it. I love Carphine more than ever right now. I feel so bad for Stephanie- she's being forced to put her relationship with Carlos for her dad. I like how you showed some of her troubles with her dad. Aww the ending was so sweet, I loved it.

Okay this was my favorite chapter by far! Its Carphanie first of all so what's not to freaking adore!

It was just so sweet. Carlos on this chapter was so caring and willing to do anything to make sure she was alright while he was gone. Seriously why can't I find a Guy like that? Anyway sorry about that. But what I liked the most was Stephanie's initial reaction. They are just both so selfless. Stephanie was so happy and proud of him while Carlos cared about how it would affect her. It was such a sweet and genuine chapter. It made me cry. Carphanie is such a good couple!

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what's next!

This is a little overdue, but I love how you write Kendall and Jo's relationship. This chapter was very realistic and I could see something like this happening in their relationship. When Jo started crying, I wanted to cry. I could really feel the tension you built in this chapter, it was great(:

i love this. It's different from all the stories. It breaks my heart how the girls feel the need to split up with the boys. I hope after the tour they can be back together :)