was wondering when the next chapter was coing out. I been waiting for a all time now. Are you going to continue the story or not? Please let us knew.

Is Wolverine going to find out that Jubilee is having his child. Will Jubilee go back to Wolverine and The X-Men? Will Jubilee have Wolverine's love. Will they live happy ever after. So many question that only you can answer.

hi, like your story and can wait to read more. keep it coming.

I really liked this story, keep up the good work. Will there be more?

I like the concept of the story, what Jubilee does after her 'affair' with Logan after The Hunger, and how she was carrying Logan's baby.

However, you sort of lost me in the huge mass of other new characters you invited, and you lost not only me but a part of Jubilee in the big jumble.

Another thing to work on is in a couple of the chapters your paragraphing needed a little work because when you have about fifty lines in one paragraph that also looses people.

Good luck.

I have only one question. Are Jubliee and Logan going to get together? I hope so, thanks.

This story is great. It was such a nice surprise to see an update.

Great story. Hope to read more soon.

Great story. I am loving it so far. Can't wait to see what happens.

boy...miss out on a few chapters and look what happens! Keep up the great work...I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.

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It is very good, although I do think you have too many people right now in this story but I don't know what you're going to do with them (maybe they'll become just in the background later on or however you want) but it can get a little cluttered and confusing with so many (my opinion only). I would just pick one or two, three at most to keep in the center of the story with Jubilee. Anyway the point is, it's a good story so far and i'd love to continue reading to see where you're going with this.

ur going to think i'm butting in, but I think that Jubes should have a girl instead of a boy. thta's just my opinion. Anywho, keep on writting!

What the hell is this? I'm all confused. Are these people suppose to be some foster family? Are these characters from a different story that you previously written? Is this Moira McTaggart and are they all at Muir island? Or is this California? Where in California and how can you drive from New York to Cali in 6 hours ?

It would be nice to have details in Fanfiction such as this so there wouldn't be any confusion. I can't/refuse to assume anything about anybody just because you wrote it so. For Example am I suppos to assume that Jubilee just teleported to Muir Island or where ever she is. Am I to assume that she knows these people from a previous foster family?

this is a great sequal to the previous story...i like it alot and cain't wait for more