I do like that last line. Very tasty.

Well that was nice. Very well done, good job.

Gah! How terrifying ... what a hideous voice that lives in there. I love your lines "you wouldn't even think of killing him ..." and then he goes on to think deeply about it, to mull over the blood. You are an excellent author and I do hope to see more from you!

Very, very nicely done! I really like this piece of work and I hope that you either decide to expand on it or write some more stories. Its dark, and slightly psychologically creepy, and offers a really in character insight into Cals mental state.