I labored through the first chapter, constantly jumping back and re-reading, trying rather unsuccessfully to make sense of strange phrases, what's happening and who's speaking. Luckily, I find that I am not interested in reading on anyway because I require a wee bit of plausibility.

I loved this story. I knew from the beginning how was at the lab. I mean you could tell after she said"his bone structure". I can not wait for the next chapter. I can tell it will be a good one.

I'm loving this story.

One thing I would like though is for it to be a little more clear who is speaking at times.

There are also a few issues with homophones. (Words that sound the same, but are spelled differently or have different meanings.) The words are not spelling errors, so your spell check won't find them most of the time because they are real words. This is definitely an instance where a beta reader would be beneficial to catch those mistakes.

I hope to see another update soon. :)

XOXO,

Jen

Good three chapters

Ooooh! brilliant.

great couple of chapters. glad he's ok no big damage from the accident. sweet how bones is staying home to take care of him. look forward to more soon

I'm very interested to see how this all plays out. :)

XOXO,

Jen

great start to a new fic. look forward to more soon, how they going to keep their baby and romance secret now?