U r really gd :D update soon xx

Great story! I think Lilly should end up being with Peter, they're cute together. Update soon! :)

I think it feels wired having hook fall in love but good story! :D

Okay, I like your story overall, but there are just some things that are driving me crazy! For one: Lilly. How old is she? I like the original story lines of a younger girl, maybe twelve or thirteen, with Peter. I DO NOT like this. And secondly: HOOK?! No! Nononononono! That's just wrong! And isn't he forty or something?! It just creeps me out. Majorly. It's just... No.

Not trying to disrespect your work or anything, there are some people who like it, but I don't. I apologize if I sound rude, I am not trying to be.

This chapter was amazing! Please update as soon as you can, I really want to know what happens at dinner!

Where's the rest! This is brilliant.

Brilliant chapter, update soon.

fanstastico

I read four chapters and LOVED this. Great job!

Great chapter, update soon.

I love it more please update

Great chapter, I loved it! Please update soon.

Don't know what to say other than keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see more!

Great story! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Of course, because I'm the beta, I'm a little biased, but great job! You put in a couple things that I didn't that really added to the story. I hope everyone else likes it as much as I do... :)