Oh, I loved this. Of course, I love Jake. He makes me smile, and I bleed for his heartbreak. That letter was soooo Jake. Sigh...

Very moving

Nice one! You should write Jake more often. :)

very cool

Oh, this was a surprise!

Jacob waxed eloquent, and to good effect. I can only imagine how Edward felt. And how devastated Bella had been during "the talk."

Wow.

Woah...absolutely loved it! I'm not normally a BellaXJacob fan but this sounds absolutely amazing...even though it's only the first chapter. :) Update soon! I can't wait to here the rest!

ReaAnn

Oh this is just soooo good. Please keep updating. I love Jake and Bella together.

Not a Jake fan, I mean, he's cute and all, but he's no Edward...and he WILL IMPRINT and leave her cold. However, it was a heartfelt letter, no less than I'd expect from a 16 year old with a crush and a timeline to try to win the girl. It was a beautiful scene him showing up at the wedding in Breaking Dawn..seen it yet? I've seen it twice and going again this weekend. *hugs*

Awww man. I would just MELT if Jacob sent me a letter like that! Lol. It was extremely heartfelt...apparently he said all of the right things because Bella finally got over her idiocy and went to go get her wolf!

NOT at all what I was expecting, but I loved it anyway. Very well done, and very different...but I love it! Could have happened that way...

This is so good! I don't usually like Jacob, or Bella, but I like them both in this. Your Jacob said everything I imagine Jacob would have said if he'd written a letter like that. I teared up a bit when Edward said those six words. But it's right. I love it, really I do.