 pixiepatti 4/10/12 . chapter 16 Excellent. |
 mw 4/7/12 . chapter 16 I loved it! One of the best vietnam era fics I've read! |
 JudasFm 4/2/12 . chapter 16I liked this a lot; it was well written and easy to read and your descriptions felt very real :) (I especially enjoyed Murdock's pushing Hannibal out of the helicopter! XD) I also like how you manage to throw in references to Face's past without becoming too angsty XD Looking forward to the next one! |
 abfirechick 3/31/12 . chapter 16I like the ending in one way but in another I don't want it to end either! I do enjoy to developing characters and everything. Please give us more! |
 Liliththestormgoddess 3/26/12 . chapter 16It's over? I love that Murdock got Face on the team and not the other way around…but it was sad that that Vietnamese fellow died :( Great story, I really do hope you write more! |
 chandy 3/25/12 . chapter 16This was definitely worth the wait! Nice twist having Murdock being the one to get Face on the Team. Murdock seems to come into play last in most Vietnam-era fics, almost as an afterthought. I like the way it was presented here. Nice touch with the mention of Decker getting socked. It set up a great timeline. |
 KennaC 3/25/12 . chapter 16I love that Murdock manipulated Hannibal that way without Hannibal even realizing it. Great team intro story. Loved it! |
 ffern 3/25/12 . chapter 16Bravo! Bravo!
Encore! Encore!
I hope Hannibal isn't upset about Murdock orchestrating everything, but respects the planning and carry-through!
Your Murdock is awesome. |
 silvermoongirl10 3/25/12 . chapter 16great ending! if you are going to be writing more stories from this time period i am looking forward to them!:) |
 Long Live BRUCAS 3/25/12 . chapter 16Glad Murdocks made it to them and then they all were able to get out of there and back to ,base.
And now Hannibal know how he really got Face and Murdock. |
 thecathedral22 3/25/12 . chapter 16I really loved to read this story. The story line is interesting, and the characters are spot on. Only BA could be more I think, but I know it is not easy to write about BA.
I am looking forward to read your next three Vietnam stories. |
 Sandilynn Petersen 3/24/12 . chapter 16Excellent! I'm sorry that this is the end of this particular story. I've enjoyed reading it so much. I've read true stories and fictional novels about Viet Nam and I would say your story ranks up there with the best of them. I like the way you captured each of the characters throughout this story. And, of course, you are a master at cliffhangers at the end of each chapter. Looking forward to the next Viet Nam-based story you write. |
 JPsmiles 3/24/12 . chapter 16Great job! I look forward to the next stories! :) |
 Avirra 3/24/12 . chapter 16At least Hannibal can appreciate someone smart enough to play him *l*. Enjoyable start to your planned series. |
 KennaC 3/24/12 . chapter 15YEA! Murdock made it. I mean, I knew he would. I wasn't worried or nothin'... LOL! Great chapter :D |