Oh I can't believe I've missed this story of yours! Was so glad to discover it today! I loved it. The word play with the names -Mick-Tina-Mark-Tony - is too funny! I can imagine them saying this :-) And I loved this part so much:

"David pulled her into his arms. He wiped her tears away with his thumb. "Don't cry' he murmured huskily. "I hate it when you cry." - *sigh* very beautifully written. *sigh*

I liked how the date went :-)