Wonderful! It stays w/ you.

just...great ! but Luna is a bit too mean I think.

This definitely needs another chapter. Like the battle, Asura vs the immortals. It would make an awesome sequel too! PM me if you have any ideas or review my stories!

This story is awesome! Luna is a bit bitchy but I don't care. I love the idea and how 'Death' began 'his' existence. I would love another chapter but since you said it is complete I will just try to think how this could continue. I think I will laugh a lot.

Luna vs. Maka..lol

what hapens when asura faces them?

What an awesome one-shot! I wouldn't mind if you turned it into a story though, that would be the greatest :)

I thought it was doing great at the beginning, but don't you think that the "Family" was quite too conceited in their part? I hated how the four treated the students. Yes, they were gods and all, but such treatment in the first meeting really stirred negative aura around and might instill rebellion and insubordination. It would have sounded smarter if the battle plan itself was discussed and the story went on...it must have been more epic. Your storytelling seems superior, too bad that it was just a oneshot...

This story is incredible! I love the personalities you gave the characters and the explanations! Thank you for writing this!

Absolutely amazing I loved this and would love more but in itself is brilliantly done! Than you for posting. :)

nice! thanks for sharing

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

I like it. Nice work here. I kind of want to see how Harry and Kid bond as new brothers. Like how would Kid react to Harry being His god brother even when they look alike. That kind of thing. I really like this. Till next time.

I have to sort of agree withe narutofan020. The blatant favoritism for the Harry Potter side is okay but at least give the soul eater cast some credit. I mean Stein is stronger than all the kids put together so he could at least put up some fight...

Otherwise your story is awesome! Though you should get a beta to fix it and it might be a bit of an easier read. It's all so scrunched together...

This is really good! Like.. REALLY. GOOD.

Write more please? :D

Ok,this is the closest to a flame that i have ever done.

You are obviously a Harry Potter 't need much time to see ,this is...it's a good idea but making the Soul Eater cast seem so weak in comparison to the Harry Potter crew,not to mention that Luna is a rude bitch that let the idea of being a leader go to her head.

Now,i really do like Harry Potter fanfiction and Luna is one of my favorite characters,but this story is unbalanced,too cramped together and completely,if inadvertently,bashes the entire Soul Eater crew,which is annoying for me because Soul Eater is one of my favorite ,if your gonna make crossovers and favor the Harry Potter side,then at least give the other side more credit than that.

No,i'am not a Soul Eater fanboy,but showing blatant favoritism in a story just ruins the other side for fans of the series.I also find it ironic that the Harry Potter guys damn the Soul Eater crew for acting just like they did when they were younger.

I'am a very positive person,and i rarely bad mouth stories unless they are isn't terrible,it's a good idea but the favoritism is what annoys me the most.

Just realized i was ranting,sorry bout close,yes i realize that i haven't written any stories and yes this may appear to be a flame but it isn't,just giving my ,and thanks if you do read this and not curse me out on it.