Excellent story.. It kept me interested the whole time.. You should write another chapter.

fun. me likey. and it was fluffy.

lol, Valentine was so crap. Funny Dawn, good Dawn, get BX together. :)

This is really cute, I love it. And Xander coming over with flowers and chocolate, that's so sweet. :)

“Well, at least I didn’t sleep with a vampire!”

“HE HAS A SOUL.”

“Not after you were through with him.”

HAH! Nice one! :D

OH well... this sounds like B/X. I don't especially like B/X... but it was fun reading the story. And as a vignette it would be REALLY good. I liked the interaction between the sisters. God! It sounded as if you'd taken it from real life! Ha! And... couldn't this be a D/X? They are so much cuter (in my opinion, of course!) But anyways, keep on writing. Even if I don't like the main pairing too much, I certainly liked your style.

I liked that a lot. Although I mostly like to read W/G stories (strange, I know) I like the B/X pairing as well. Anyway, nice job - hope you write more soon!

Nikita

(R & R my fics too, please!) :-)

hello there,

i like this one, i'm not really into reading buffy-fics but i do like this one very much. you're good, i almost felt like i was reading a real episode of the series, which i do love...i know, it doens't make sense, but that don't matter. anyway, keep up the writing. you're good at it!

love,

faith