Another great Face Amy love story.

And Murdock being the one to know about there feelings. But he could say anything.

There are a few things in this story that don't sit well with me. One is that this story is mainly told rather than shown; I like it the other way around. I recognized it's hard to do that when you are mainly discussing feelings, but you could have shown some Team missions where Face looks out for Amy first and we see what Murdock saw. 'Cause if I have to go on what I saw myself in the second season episodes with Amy, it was not a mutual attraction between Face and Amy. It looked more like she still hadn't forgiven him for killing her car.

That's the second issue I have: for me a Face-Amy attraction doesn't follow naturally from canon so the author has to work on it to make me believe it, and you didn't make me believe it. Again, it would have helped if you had shown those moments of attraction.

Then there is the point of exchanging e-mails. Though it was possible to send e-mails in around 1984 (when this story is probably playing as Amy left in late 1983), it was hardly commonplace and particularly Face would have a hard time finding a computer from which to send e-mails. Why not be avid pen pals?

I love this story...we definitely need more Amy stories...and Face stories) I love how Murdock is the one that senses and sees all this, very true to character.

Sorry folks, if you read this the first time it was posted, then you'll have read half of my next story, which got added to the first by the computer goblins (nothing to do with me...really!) Yes well, ho hum!. Thanks for the good review, keep them coming, more stories to follow! Catty. :)

I read this the first time you posted it and loved it. I noticed then that there was more to the story. While I admit, it didn't seem like it fit completely with this, I enjoyed it as well. I hope we will see it appear here in its own right soon. We need more good Amy stories. Keep up the good work.

Yay! It worked! Well done Catty, more to follow...