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mulussu 5/28/12 . chapter 2
hahahah, this was great! please make a sequel!
Elle 4/21/12 . chapter 2
Hello Paw-Bells,

I'm very smitten with how you made Itachi's and Sakura's characters! I would love it if you could continue with a sequel... Maybe M rated? :3

Thank you,

Elle
Itachilover 4/12/12 . chapter 2
Write more.! It's awesome some jealousy we'd be awesome. I will even convince all of my fan crazed itasaku mates to read and comment.
JasmineDragon22 4/4/12 . chapter 2
This made me laugh so hard at sakura's stubbornness I loved it :)
Stardust and Constellations 4/4/12 . chapter 1
It is clear to see you have taken valuable time and dedication to write the current chapters so far; they both are engaging and well paced.

I adore the way you have presented each character, keeping them all true to their personalities without distorting too much.

Thank-you for writing this wonderful story and I cannot wait to read more :)

E
ms Masen 3/26/12 . chapter 2
no one writes itachi like you do, haha..
EmiliaKyuchi 2/26/12 . chapter 2
This was great! I like the Sakura in this story because she doesn't take crap from anyone :) Anywho if you do happen to make more for this verse I can't wait to read it, but if not this series was really great!
LavenderSkies 2/26/12 . chapter 2
This one's entertaining as well. Especially Team 7's reactions to finding out about Itachi's interest in Sakura. And it's funny how they all seem so whipped by Sakura. LOL!

A lot of little things I found amusing:

Sasuke's long recurring fantasy to have his brother ask him for help.

The pervert turned okama.

The expression "Chauvinism in Team Seven had died a painful, violent, bloody death a long, long time ago." XD

And Itachi as the "emotionally constipated ANBU captain". LMAO!

I had fun reading this one. thanks for sharing!
xLL-Ax 2/18/12 . chapter 2
Heey,

just read your whole tossing-a-coin-universe storys D

I loved it

One question, why didn't you make one story instead of four?

Anyway, loved it. And I agree, they're an odd couple. But a cute one.

Good job
angrypixels 2/11/12 . chapter 2
I really liked this series!Anymore?
sensoray 2/5/12 . chapter 2
ah i love the series of one shots-ending in this two-shot. It was lovely :)
Dreaming while awake 2/5/12 . chapter 2
Awesome! Itachi sure is persistent ;)
Akatsuki no Uso 1/20/12 . chapter 2
Really great two-shot. 'Training' is a great addition to the 'Tossing a Coin'-verse. I also have to agree that this seems to be a great ending for this verse. I am a huge fan of your works and am excited that you have decided to start back up on FF again! Cannot wait to see what you come up with next!
Faith 1/20/12 . chapter 2
It is now 5:27 a.m., I gotta go to work in a few hours, but I don't regret staying up with this story.
fanofthisfiction 1/10/12 . chapter 2
Thank you for continuing this tale. Taking character attributes that stand out for each character and moving forward with them, is the glue that drives this story ahead. There were moments of surprise for me...like when the kiss happened (that changed everything) but it was all done so very much in line with the story, it worked well. I enjoy all of your works and am glad you posted this, despite having it in the backlogs of your story drawers for awhile. As always, I look forward to the stories you share to this community.
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