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Jelp 5/27/12 . chapter 13
Hahahaha! I love how Sonoko seems to fangirl over any and all couples. Love how you displayed her character in this story.

Poor Shinichi and Kaito! It was an interesting take on a darker Kaito. It was always in the back of my mind that he had been a killer, even if it was a killer of people from the wraiths which had kidnapped him. Interesting AU. Jelp
DayDreaming0f y0u 5/19/12 . chapter 11
Holy freakin crap! Kaito did all this? Oh gosh. And it was because Shinichi was in danger. They all are now. Kaito needs to stop. What if it gets out of control? This is just fantastic. I really love it. When is their back up going to arrive? Not that they need it, but you know. For comfort and all that.
Shara Raizel 5/17/12 . chapter 13
so this fic is over now huh? oh well. it was good! loved reading it. looking forward to reading future stories of yours that you said were going to take place in this universe. sonoko and ran spying on them was rather fun. liked how heiji and ran had to drag sonoko away at the end. XD
Sketchy Tone 5/16/12 . chapter 13
Thanks for completing this story. It's lovely and I look forward to other stories from this universe. There are soooo many possibilities to write about considering the lack of common knowledge with these two. :3
Akarui Fuyu 5/15/12 . chapter 13
I can't believe that it's the end of this fic. The epilouge is great, yeah, really really great. The way Kai chan cares for Shin chan, from the first to now, is always so sweet, tender, protective and full of love. The dancing scene is so romantic. I can't help giggling when I read the conversation between Sonoko and Ran. Your Sonoko ver is too cute. I hope you will continue writing about this universe because everything you wrote about is just perfect and interesting to me. See you soon :))
Nightpounce 5/15/12 . chapter 13
This was a really nice ending to a great story and i am really happy to hear that you are planning to play in this verse a little more in the future.

I loved the image of the two boys dancing at the end and Ran hauling Sonoko away with Heiji, made me snicker.

This verse was a bit darker than your others but really nicely created and the characters were still themselves even in the different setting.

Thanks for sharing and looking forward to what comes next :)
LMeg9.20 5/14/12 . chapter 13
Cute. Loved Kaito taking Shinichi outside to dance. Sonoko sneaking outside was funny, so was Hattori and Ran dragging her away.
noctisluxys 5/14/12 . chapter 13
Thank you

I really loved this and you made me really happy

but that kiss...had been nice

well I can't have everything

thank you again for your hard work

I'll follow your work
Shara Raizel 5/1/12 . chapter 12
i love how out of touch with the ordinary kaito and shinichi are with such simple things as parties and gifts. XD i liked this chapter and i can't wait for the next one!
Nightpounce 5/1/12 . chapter 12
This update was great (they always are) but i was hanging out to see what happened next and if Shinichi would be able to calm Kaito down and bring him back.

I felt really sorry for the boys, continuously having to pick themselves but up after being dragged back to the shadows but i didn't feel sorry at all for the group that kidnapped Shinichi. He did warn them they would not get away with it.

Heiji and Ran's reactions were interesting and i like the way they kept the details from Sonoko...who just accepted it and moved on. Love how you kept them all in character in such an AU setting and the setting itself was great

The rose pendant was a nice way to bring Kaito's trademark in and i loved how they both asked the same question at the end :)

Loved it

Thank you!
LMeg9.20 5/1/12 . chapter 12
I love how the beginning of this chapter started off chaotic, but ended peaceful. At least Shinichi stopped Kaito before any serious damage could be done. And Kaito had to learn that lesson sooner or later. I also loved the parts where Kaito and Shinichi both thought the pendant was suppose to do something. Made me giggle.
Kaida-14Kage 4/21/12 . chapter 11
Oh wow-i sort of expected that when you said Kaito wouldn't stop smiling.

Poor Kaito and Shinichi-I can't blame Kaito for snapping-he is going to feel really bad later...

Hmmm How is Saguru, Heiji, and Ran going to react? He just saw how dangerous Kaito can be after all...not to mention Heiji and Saguru were wary of Kaito before-though that might have been more becuase of that smile Kaito had.

I couldn't help but smile when I read that Ran broke that guy's arm XD Go Ran! XD

CAn't beileve the chapter is almost over! Looking foward to more!
Mystical Crimson Dance 4/17/12 . chapter 11
The anticipation is killing me! Translation 1: I love this story so much you better not hold off too long or I'll hack into your comp and finish it my self! Translation 2: Epic story! Forever my favorite

I fell for the pairing KaiShin ever since Kaito made his appearance The suits the story so well and is well written. If I didn't know any better I prob would have thought this be the real thing xD

Do your best! Ganbatte
ichigo-lover-1412 4/17/12 . chapter 11
Alright i cufuse! I'm in love with this fanfic! I need more, other wise i will die! By the way i love anry kaito!XD
Akarui Fuyu 4/16/12 . chapter 11
So, what happened exactly? You left me very confused right now though it's praise-worthy complimenting you for such a great chapter. I can imagine clearly what you have described. Hope there's nothing bad happening to Kaito. Hix, I wish it will be a happy ending. Kaishin deserve to have a peaceful yet joyful life themselves. Come back soon, I can't waite to see the last chapter
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