Wow, I really have to say you did an awesome job in writing out Hercules and Iolaus. I really feel like I'm watching an episode of the show. The ending of this chapter was also pretty good and you did an excellent job in the part about Macaria revealing who she is to Hercules and the way that Hercules handled that revelation.

Hi,

Great work! I like the way you wrote Hera as well as Macaria. I also really like the plot of the story. Please continue!

Another great job. I really enjoyed this story as well as the one over at Young Hercules.