i love it. the subtle details of the house, the way itachi thinks, the uplifting end, your characterization- it's amazing.

I liked it! Please upload chapter 2 soon, and try to keep it this good.

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I love your Deidara. I really fucking do. I can't tell you enough how much I get annoyed when they over do his "yeahs" and/or "uns" and you worked it in perfect! like a speech habit that comes out of irritation rather than something annoying that's said after every word, like in that one episode in spongebob.

AND JUST GSDGISDAKGNMASGOFWNEGFIQW

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

THANK YOU

Continue!

I also love genderbending, and your descriptions are beautiful!

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