Poor Haruka. Haha!

But yay! You have no idea how hard I was trying to keep my screams in! Can I add this to my faves, oh I don't know, maybe ten times? I love everything about this. I love how you wrote the narrations, I loved the dialogues, I loved the characterization, and I even loved how confused you made me when it came to trying to figure out who the characters were.

Despite my very little knowledge about Tono and Shizune as characters, I loved this and I understood both characters very well. Also, if I may say so, you helped me understand both characters in a way that my very little manga reading has failed to do.

Thank you for writing this. It was beautiful. :)

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I just remembered, you said he was a Dangerous Ability, and I think that's what made me assume you were writing about Natsume. Isn't Tono a Special Ability though? Or have I missed even that tiny detail by putting my Gakuen Alice reading on hold? OTL

Anyway, if he lives up to what he said about always being in Shizune's favor, then... then... I don't even know. But Haruka and... Shizune, and... my feels. :((

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Is this chapter entitled 'bluff' for the reasons I hope to be true? :((

Feels. That is all I can say.

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Oh gosh I'm feeling so much feels. D: That long speech by Tono was just perfect. I can only imagine how you could have come up with something so beautiful.

I haven't finished this yet, but it's definitely going on my favorites. :)

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Tono! Yay! I got it right... after a while. Hahaha! And Shizune, yes?

And omg he loves her. ;w;

Reading on...

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I'm just an idiot, okay? I just realized that this is either Tono or Tsubasa you're writing about. Yes? Or... OTL Well, if it's as canon as I think it is, then this is probably Tono. Although since I haven't really read everything in the manga, I can't assume it's a character I don't really know. :/

Okay, I'll just sit in my little corner for the clueless.

Well-written though, as always.

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I love the character development. :)

Also, I feel I have to say that your wonderful writing is actually pushing me to start writing seriously again. :)

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Once again, I have to say I love your narrating. :)

Not much to comment on in this chapter but that and the the good characterization.

Also, I just realized I mentioned Natsume in one of my previous comments without even really knowing if it was him you were writing about. OTL

Ah well... I apologize for assuming. :)

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Oh noo I'm confused. Who is she? Hahaha! OTL When you said this was canon, I expected to know the characters and everything, but sadly, I haven't read everything in the manga, so...

Oh, unless S means Sumire, but... Anyway, I shall read on. :)

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I really like how you narrate. :) Also, this sounds like the typical playboy Natsume whose life turns around after meeting that certain someone. I'm curious how you're going to tackle it though, so on to the next chapter I go. :D

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You are seriously good in writing. I really hope you would continue writing more for us.

I'm seriously in love with your writing. I wanna read happy endings like these from you :)

haha that long speech, for a two-wrod response :p

OMG O.O love it!

It's not called Clovers, it's called Clubs.

Otherwise, good chappie.