I like it

I love this. I was so upset about what the writer's did to Jack and Carly's relationship that I just gave up on the series and pretended it ended with the Dark Signer Arc. Your story not only gave me a good plot and some wonderous J/C fluff, but a reasonable explanation to his behavior towards Carly at the end of the series. Thanks a bunch for giving me something to adopt as a headcanon.

Damn that was intense! Well the kiss in particular especially was. I have to say one thing I really like about your stories is that at least for the CarlyxJack ones I've seen from you, they don't always have that sugar coated happy ending. I love the way you portray their relationship. This was lovely, and I hope to see more like it from you in the future.

Squee!

That was kinda really awesome. Amazing job! Well done! Keep up the great work!

-moony

You write amazing 5d stories, everyone is so in character. Gawd Jack at the end made me almost blow a gasket, you're awesome

Wow, you're such a good writer. I'm so glad that you had the mind to write about it being a weird case of losing long-term memory, too (no one seems to take the time to learn about the different types of amnesia, so it stands out when someone DOES understand). And that kiss scene gave me butterflies. That never happens!

I'm looking forward to reading more 5D's fanfics by you. Please don't stop writing them-well, don't stop writing at all since you're such a mature writer. Your fics are keeping me sane in between class and homework and life in general. :)

Wow! I definitely like how this turned out and I noticed that you wrote "The phone didn't ring" about two or three times and yet you make us believe that something is about occur. Also having Jack to come back to help Carly because she lost her memories was good. It's kind of like they're meeting once more. All characters were kept the same and for the first time Mikage actually gets to talk back at Jack. Now that's what I like to call a shocker.

Definitely like this from the beginning to end.

I could totally see this happening. It was perfect. I love how you kept everyone in character yet still showed some change in them. Though I have to agree that this would have been better as multi-chapter story, but hey, you're thw author, so it's your choice. Anyhoo, awesome job! I loved this!

this was a one-shot?

Awesome story , but you really could have just made it into a multi-chapter story

I really like this one shot. It was amazing what you did with Carly memories and having Jack and her fall in love all over again. It was a brilliant one shot.

Wow I haven't logged in for a long time, but I felt that this story was worth a review! But what is there to review, when I loved it so much! It was so cute and I found Jack's obsession with Carly adorable.

Haha I'm looking forward to any other story you write.

I love this. I love it love it it's so wonderfully written. And there are more fluff than your usual chapters. I am so happy you wrote more on this couple. I love this couple!

Please work on more stories regarding Carly and jack!