Good story. Keep smiling. :-)

Oh, bravo! This was a wonderful chapter. I was on the edge of my seat, even though I knew that everything would turn out alright in the end. I wasn't completely sure who some of the people in the Doctor's apparent past were, but you capture the Doctor's mindset very well, and his reluctance to bring harm to Amy by hanging around once Prisoner Zero has been dealt with. I also loved the Doctor's determination to protect Amy and not draw attention to her. Great job! :)

This is lovely.

Also, I've got Lungbarrow open in another program right now, and now you're giving references to it while I haven't seen anyone ever do that before...This is creepy O_o

You have to be VERY careful when dealing with the Faction! They can cause all sorts of headaches, as the Doctor is familiar with from a previous incarnation (His 8th). Now, lets see what he can do to put a stop o it.

You've just gotten rid of Mels... who is Melody... who is River. So clearly, by getting to Amy when she's fourteen, you're stopping her and Rory from falling in love? Oh please say yes. _

Any ways, please update soon! I love this story so far!

Can they do it? Can they save the world in twenty minutes? Of course they can - the Doctor and his mad impossible Amy Pond can do anything!

I was so excited to find this new chapter waiting for me in my inbox. Things are heating up for the pair. I'm intrigued by the changes you've made - what's happened to Mels? ;) - and can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold.

Until next time ... cheers! :)

Good chapter.

I liked how you included Melody/River in the list of Amy's friends. Nice add on.

I also liked how you wrote the confrontation between Amy and the Doctor. Very well done.

Interesting twist at the end with Amy forgetting about Mels and not thinking about Rory. I wonder what's going on here?

Keep up the good work!

Nice reading. Keep smiling. :-)

This is a very interesting turn of events... I've seen no mistakes, so good job! And I thank you for that little comment a while ago about the sethoscope being in the jacket which was too tight and was somewhere lying in the console room... I've always wondered where that thing went... X-D

Please continue! :-)

First off, Mels. Could that be a reference to Melanie Bush? If it is, then its good to see her again. As for the twist at the end, with Paradox Factioon involed, we have Amy being forced to make a choice at age 14, compared to what she was at the age she was in the TV series, which she NEVER GOT TO DO!

Really nice. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

Good chapter.

I like how you're putting your own spin on what happened in the episode.

Looking forward to what happens next.

Keep up the good work!

I know it's not going to happen, but a part of me really hopes The Doctor is back within five minutes, because I love fics featuring Amelia rather than Amy.

Well, I can't see any major changes to the timeline yet. But, I am happy to see that you put in some companinos that were mentioned in the books that came out after the TV series ended. Now, lets see how things change in the next chapter.

What a wonderful continuation. I love the Doctor and Amelia's interaction almost as much as I love his and Amy's interactions. The Doctor's just good with children, which is something to see. Great start :)