There should be a sequel where Hi and Shelton find the bodies...

sad but serioiusly romantic

WAHH! That was so sad! (But amazing ;3)

OMG, it might be because I was in a car for nine hours and extremely tired, I'm just emotional, this was really sad, or maybe it's all three, but I'm crying. Love it!

Awh! That was really cute, but really sad! You need to finish your other Virals story!

That is sad. I'm gonna cry now.

This story is wonderfully amazing! Well written and well thought out! It would be amazing if there were more chapters but I believe it was a one-shot...? Either way, beautiful writing!

OMVirals, did you just kill my two favorite characters off. Yes you did. OMV. Crying forever. Internally of course

Yo!

I was reading this in science class, and i almost started crying!

Soo sweet and cute!

Kupo

YOU DID NOT JUST KILL MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS.

You did. Wow.

*cries forever*

Just kidding. I'll just go read some fluff and get over it. But, still. WOW. This was kind of amazing. I love your writing style.

-Ella :)

So sad but I love

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I usually HATE IT when people kill people I love off, but this is the only one I have liked, no, LOVED EVER! Keep writing for Virals, you could be a successful author one day.

Amazing. Amazing writing, amazing details, amazing everything. WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE? Shhh... Mo, just breathe... :)

Depressing, but really good, all the same.

-Lil' Mo :D

Congragulations Daydreamer! You just broke reality with the hammer of depresion. Good job!

LOVE IT! Please continue with one more chapter in Shelton and Hi's Point Of View's after Tory and Ben die! PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!

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