|Reviews for FFTimeTravel|
| AlucardBahamut 2/7/13 . chapter 7
Hah, just as I suspected! The "apprentice" was Ovelia! I suppose, then, that the "Master Monk" is Agrias; am I right?
Also I never imagined a Time Travel fic of Final Fantasy Tactics but this one is amazing! By the way, is it just me or does "Future!Ramza" seem to be somehow still awake and inside "Past!Ramza"'s mind? I mean, I suspect Future!Ramza talked with Past!Ramza right after Past!Ramza drank the poisoned ale, or was it something else?
As for good fanfics to read, hmm, I'm not sure if you've read them but Lucillia's Naruto fics tend to be very fun and well written (do consider, though, that she tends to make the Uchiha much "nicer" than canon so if you absolutely despise them it is better if you stay away from it, unless you are feeling like reading alternate interpretations of them) but other good fics are Time Braid by ShaperV and It's For a Good Cause I Swear! by Sarah1281.
You may notice that I've only recommended Naruto fics but that's because I don't know what other series you like.
| Kyuubi no kami 10/16/12 . chapter 7
This is pretty good. Short, but detailing Ramza's thought process, and that of his past self alongside each other is a really interesting concept. It doesn't seem...rushed, if that makes sense. And since you keep asking for good fics and haven't updated in a couple months anyway, here are a couple suggestions. Tvtropes, fanfic rec's. They have a huge list pulling from video games, anime, manga, books, tv shows...And plenty of each genre within each of those. To highlight a few of them, SerialRavist has a few FFT fics, the romance is solid in Heart of Gold without getting too mushy, and Iceman is very...well it kinda reminds me of how you deal with combat in this one. Ramza is very analytical with his fights, focus is on outmanuvering rather than overpowering enemies. Its a tragedy though so the tone is dark.
Nugar has People Lie, a Naruto fic with Lovercraftian themes and a dark sense of humor. Kenchi618 is a very solid writer, who focuses on crossovers, a lot of his earlier work is...flawed beyond redemption, but there's a lot of obvious improvement later on, The Newest Challenger is one of the better examples.
This review has been heavy on talking about other fics but you did ask, and nobody else seems to have thrown you any good stories. Hopefully you can find a bit of inspiration to continue writing this story, because it'd be a shame to see another hopeful storyline shut down.
| Viktorius 10/4/12 . chapter 7
Really enjoying this as well! Especially the voice in italics speaking to him.
The first chapter has an excellent hook!
| LancelotQuanta 10/2/12 . chapter 7
let the game guide thee.
| Katonus 9/29/12 . chapter 7
I definitely look forward to more chapters of FFTT. I like how you're growing the characters, and particularly that you aren't directly following cannon events, and the characters even staying true to their characters, are growing differently because of that. Keep up the great work!
And thanks for writing for my favorite game of all time bar none.(I've spent well over 2k hours playing it on the PS1, and I know another 600-700 on the psp.)
| Mr. Omelette 9/27/12 . chapter 7
I demand you continue this. Really. If you don't, I will hunt you. So, please... update soon?
| Granoc 9/13/12 . chapter 7
very few decent FFT fanfics out there and even though this is still a bit short it does promise to be a cut above the rest. Please do continue.
| Tantei1412 9/12/12 . chapter 7
Oh, just remembered to review this chapter.
The last part was quite a pleasant twist. Who is Mad Dog anyway? And I still don't know the identity of the Master monk... perhaps an OC? Quite intriguing. I hope to see more, as this is probably the first Peggy Sue of FFT ever and the timeline is already quite screwed. Perhaps someone else came back, but with clearer memories? Though that has been used frequently as well, though not to the degree that it can be called a cliche. All in all, looking forward to see you update all your stories!
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 7
Awesome. You've turned Dycedarg into even more of a evil genius bastard.
Also, nice twist at the end. Time to put this story on alert/favorite.
In regards to stories for you to read, any particular genre or series? Could probably find something to interest you.
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 6
I like your opinions on the difference between job calsses and status.
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 5
Setup complete indeed. Well done.
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 4
Temporally freezing a waterfall, awesome.
I like the nirvana requirement you give to becoming a Holy Knight.
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 3
Waterfall meditation yay!
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 2
The names are randomly generated for generics, except in the cases of Rad, Lavian and Alicia.
Anyway, nice chapter. I like the inclusion of the princess, even if Ramza doesn't know it.
| Jimbobob5536 9/7/12 . chapter 1
Looks like fun so far.