This story was amazing and beautifully written I must say. The way you describe the setting, emotions, and surrounding features is breathe taking; I felt like I was there watching the two talk! I'm never on anymore, but these fanfictions in my inbox are always what bring me back to the site to read. Keep up the beautiful work, cant wait for the rest of the chapters.

I thought this was very good. I really enjoy stories written in this format - kind of detached from the person that its really about and you did it wonderfully. And you know I love you as an author. :)

The only thing I would say is to not keep the entire story in italics. It takes away from your writing because its more distracting than emphatic. Its a type of flashback, but since its not in the present tense (and placed in the middle of an ongoing story) the italics aren't needed. I hope that makes since!

Again, you're an incredible writer. Your description of the characters, setting, and the raw emotion is amazing. Can't wait for more!

It's always a surprise to get a YuYu Hakusho fic in my inbox; it's been so long! This is good.

I loooooved this story. The way it was written flowed beautifully. You're a great author!