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alistarsmusic 2/18/13 . chapter 17If I remember correctly, Elena told Winsey about Alana trying to take over her body and if I'm correct than that might be the reason why Winsey didn't start freaking out about Elena falling to her knees but instead calmly holding her so she wouldn't hurt herself. Winsey is truly a good friend. I wonder what Winsey will do though? I don't know if she has a solution for what Elena is going through but I kind of hope she does. And they guys! I still don't trust Daniel. Especially the way he was acting...he's totally faking it. Why can't Elena see that though? I bet Daniel's going to be happy Alana's back though...and Arsenio...I feel so bad for him. He gets the end of the stick from Elena (meaning, he doesn't get as much feelings from her as she gives Daniel). Can't wait to read more! |
yusagi710 2/7/13 . chapter 16Amazing story. It’s midnight and i’m reading it. Update soon X3 |
foxface333ChocolateLabrador 2/4/13 . chapter 16Oh My Gosh I just read this fanfic and I love it! It's so well written, I honestly can't wait to read more! |
alistarsmusic 2/2/13 . chapter 16Thank you for the very long chapter! But I'm still confused why Elena can't comprehend that Arsenio is still the best guy suited for her. Seriously! I would choose him ten times over Daniel. And I'm glad you introduced a new character in this chapter because Winsey seems like someone who's very intuitive and intelligent. I wonder what she'll think of both guys when she meets them? Although I hope her advice from before doesn't change. I really hope she pushes for Elena to choose Arsenio. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please! n_n |
Avery Collins 2/1/13 . chapter 16I swear, if she chooses Daniel... Can't she see what's plainly in front of her eyes? Arsenio is the guy. He's her guy! |
FaItH601z 1/31/13 . chapter 1i love ur story |
Siabhan 1/2/13 . chapter 15great stry , but it's really fustr8ng how shes bck and forth between the 2 guys , she needs 2 make up her damn mind hahaha |
Avery Collins 10/14/12 . chapter 15No, no, no ,no, no! Has Elena completely lost her mind? How can she be so completely blind? Daniel is such a jerk and Arsenio is such a sweetheart. Open your eyes, Elena |
MissNerdyGirl12 9/14/12 . chapter 15I love this storyyyy! Please update soon! I am in love with Arsenio/Emil's character! |
alistarsmusic 9/9/12 . chapter 15Nooo! Why can't Elena get over Daniel?! She has Arsenio now...Hell I'd choose Arsenio over Daniel any day. And she told him she loved him! And she still feels guilty about Daniel catching him?! Ahh! I hope she gets over him soon! I don't think Daniel's the right guy for her. Especially if she felt such powerful sparks with Arsenio. I think their soul mates...I can't wait to read more! So please update soon! |
Guest 9/8/12 . chapter 13 Please make an actuall book because this is so good |
lilliana-aka-josafinna 4/28/12 . chapter 14Whoa, Elena is a freaking a bitch! |
alistarsmusic 4/25/12 . chapter 14I'm pretty disappointed in Elena...she won't believe anything Arsenio told her about Daniel and Alana. I think a very very small part of her believes Arsenio but she's too damn stubborn to really believe him so she kept up her defensive ways. And I think she'll stay defensive until she see's for herself that Arsenio was right. I can't wait for the next chapter! And I'm so glad you didn't put it up for adoption! XD I wish I knew how to say thank you in Korean... :] |
luvsvamps 4/24/12 . chapter 13 I think she should break up with him and start hanging out with arsenio more then put a that sound good to u? Just a suggestion don't have 2 listen 2 my planif u rant like it. |
lilliana-aka-josafinna 4/23/12 . chapter 13Dammit! I wish Elena should break up w/ Danny(aka the blondie asshole)! And let her staaaay with that duuuuude! *passed out til next chappy* |