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| Reviews for Without Kevin |
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   KarinNarutayu 10/12/12 . chapter 4Update soon. |
| KarinNarutayu 10/12/12 . chapter 3 Nice chapter . Update soon |
| KarinNarutayu 10/12/12 . chapter 2 Update soon pls |
| KarinNarutayu 10/12/12 . chapter 1 Update soon |
| ZanaZ 4/3/12 . chapter 4 I'm loving this story so far. I would have preferred a Kevin-less show by far. The chemistry between Ben and Gwen is just to good. Only real critic I have is that I'd like a few more hints of them 'like liking' each other, even if it's just a teeny bit. Anyway, good job so far. ) |
| FanficFemale 3/25/12 . chapter 4 Loved the chapter and the way you cover up the obvious plot holes and such. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| bennet001 3/24/12 . chapter 4 Truely original this story has developed nicely and the plot is way better then alien force in respect that you fill the loop in which Kevin turns better vigilante on the drop of a hat and shows that Ben actually trains with his aliens and not just wings it as he goes along update soon kyubbi |
| The Red Star 3/14/12 . chapter 3 It's a pretty good chapter. There are a few grammar problems, but nothing that really screams at you while you're reading. My only issue with the chapter itself is when Ben points out the likelihood of Kevin being able to get a license and a car. While it's definitely true, it just seems out of Ben's character for him to wisely point out anything. He's not an idiot, but the level of intelligence he displayed explaining it clashes with his language in the rest of the chapter. I suppose this is subjective, but you wanted my opinion. I like the chapter as a whole, though it's not perfect. Keep at it! Forever in the Sky, The Red Star |
| TheSunandMoon 2/6/12 . chapter 3 This had awesome comedy and played out great. |
| darthdragon 2/6/12 . chapter 3 O_O simply brilliant. You blended the origional (that which aired) With subtle hints of Bwen. Though I wish Ben had totaled the car. It had a nearly perfect blend of comedy and action (personally I would have had ben make a lame joke like when he was fighting kevin he could have hit him and said "gwen was right your head is hallow" but that is just me). I could not find a fault with this. I appologise for my lateness I just have alot going on in RL so yeah. Anyway, keep this up and I will have to start calling you the best Bwen writter. ALL HAIL KYUUBI16! |
| badkidoh 2/5/12 . chapter 3 Another great chapter. |
| code R.R 2/5/12 . chapter 3 ha loved what Kevin said at the end |
| Finny-Kun Goddess 2/5/12 . chapter 3 Nice so far. And good going Ben with kevin's car |
| Dark Dragen 2/5/12 . chapter 3 NICE... can't wait to read more, update when possible. |
| MrBlack103 2/5/12 . chapter 3 Nice touch with Ben wanting a PS4 XD |
