I locke your writing style, it's really good. All the characters seem alive. It's refreshing change from the norm to say the least. It's really rather amazing. The flow is so good, everything glides seemlessly together. I loved it.

Alex out.

Aww, really sweet. You were missing a few "the"s here and there, but overall, it was pretty good. :) Keep writing!

Minor spelling errors, but it was pretty awesome :D

Good story! Id love to see another chapter!

Awsome story