This is a negative relationship, that will get someone physically hurt, maybe even killed. His bandmates ought to lock him up right now & not let Alice see him. Maybe she will miss him enough to stop trying to bring out his worse qualities. Someone has to stop this. She may have some low life idea that is the way to make him love her more, but again, this hurting behavior will get someone killed someday unless it is terminated.

i reaaaaaallly want to know what happens next!

Nice one-shot. This could turn into quite the angsty multi-chap. Enjoyed it.

Sadistic and masochistic lovers.

Sounds like Jasper and Alice are split up and then they are playing a game of who can hurt the other the worst.

Awesome one shot, I'd give anything for a sequel. First born maybe?

Love it!

VERY COOL

Omg this should be have a sequel because it was that good. This was the best one shot I ever read

the way you write... just wow. im amazed!

Wow that had me completely mesmerized. What a powerful scene you painted so well. Great job. Can't wait for more.