|Reviews for GhostHunters|
| deepfathom 8/2/12 . chapter 7
Hey, good job! But there are a few typos here and there. You may especially want to take a look at this line in particular:
"And with that he pooped the cork on the vial."
| deepfathom 7/5/12 . chapter 6
yay! a new chapter! I was just thinking the other day that I hadn't seen any updates on this one for a while :)
| ThePowerOfFriendship 4/6/12 . chapter 5
Why am I now associating Ray with Hagrid lol?
| deepfathom 4/5/12 . chapter 5
Oo! An update! I was so excited to see the notification in my inbox that I read it immediately.
Love this! Keep it up :D
| Catietheawesome 3/31/12 . chapter 4
I like it, I like it. Very interesting concept. And ha ha, Ray talks like Hagrid!
| Hypsidium 1/24/12 . chapter 4
Oh my gosh, oh my gosh! I did NOT call any of that. Loving this so much so far! I hope we get to see Janine too, haha!
| deepfathom 1/24/12 . chapter 4
You're a great writer. This story is very imaginative and original :)
Keep it up!
| deepfathom 12/14/11 . chapter 3
I'm glad you got the next chapter up! Good job on it.
One question though: in the story description, you said this takes place in 17th century London, but the date on the prologue says 1890. I was a little confused because 17th century would mean the 1600's, not the 1800's. 1800's would be the 19th century.
You might want to think about changing that if you can. :)
| deepfathom 12/5/11 . chapter 2
Interesting perspective! Curious to see where this is going.
One little suggestion: Try seperating the dialogue into different paragraphs. It's a little confusing to know who's saying what.
Good job, though :)