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   deepfathom 8/2/12 . chapter 7Hey, good job! But there are a few typos here and there. You may especially want to take a look at this line in particular: "And with that he pooped the cork on the vial." ;) Cheers! -DF |
| deepfathom 7/5/12 . chapter 6 yay! a new chapter! I was just thinking the other day that I hadn't seen any updates on this one for a while :) |
| ThePowerOfFriendship 4/6/12 . chapter 5 Why am I now associating Ray with Hagrid lol? |
| deepfathom 4/5/12 . chapter 5 Oo! An update! I was so excited to see the notification in my inbox that I read it immediately. Love this! Keep it up :D |
| Catietheawesome 3/31/12 . chapter 4 I like it, I like it. Very interesting concept. And ha ha, Ray talks like Hagrid! |
| Hypsidium 1/24/12 . chapter 4 Oh my gosh, oh my gosh! I did NOT call any of that. Loving this so much so far! I hope we get to see Janine too, haha! |
| deepfathom 1/24/12 . chapter 4 Hooray! Updates! You're a great writer. This story is very imaginative and original :) Keep it up! |
| deepfathom 12/14/11 . chapter 3 I'm glad you got the next chapter up! Good job on it. One question though: in the story description, you said this takes place in 17th century London, but the date on the prologue says 1890. I was a little confused because 17th century would mean the 1600's, not the 1800's. 1800's would be the 19th century. You might want to think about changing that if you can. :) |
| deepfathom 12/5/11 . chapter 2 Interesting perspective! Curious to see where this is going. One little suggestion: Try seperating the dialogue into different paragraphs. It's a little confusing to know who's saying what. Good job, though :) |
