Niiiiiice. A believable psychopath. Hell, capcom should take notice and add her into a future game. If there are any...

i like it. you made clarissa believable as a psycopath. and frank is believable too. good story.

What can I say? Fantasic!

You got Franks persona spot on, and the new psychopath seemed believable. Also a much cooler way of obtaining the combo card for the Laser sword instead of looking at a poster

Nice! Very nice! You have a real knack for Dead Rising!

Your OC is believable as a psychopath, and i think you portrayed Frank well.

Overall, a good story! I enjoyed it!

-ttobba