Really sweet, and I can certainly see Elliot as the protector, the man who wants to make everything right. Very nice.

aw that was really sweet. youre a really great writter not me. i simplely loved this.

I absolutely loved it. And thank-you for not turning it into a romance!

I love LAO: SVU too! And I love the fact that Elliot and Olivia are so cloes and everything but they just can't... Ahh! The agnset drives me crazy sometimes, but I still ship them anyway. it's fanfiction, I can do that. :)

On the fic: WAY GOOD FIC! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I read it and it has been one of my fave SVU fics!

In fact, I wrote a fic that was kind of like yours, but not really. It only had Elliot and Liv mad at each other and Alex was the one she cried to about it.

Keep up the great work!

It was really good I especially liked the part where Alex walked in and when Olivia was hysterical when she just told Elliot to shut up about his was funny, yet interesting.

Aww, too sad...but sweet. Love Olivia and Elliot! Great work, btw ;)

It was so adorable! If I was Olivia, I'd be pretty pissed off at Elliot's constant prattling about his kids, too, and I've often wondered what she feels about it. It was believable and touching.

Oh that was realy good :)

This is my first time reviewing fan fic for Law and Order: SVU. I'm glad yours was the first! It was great. I really enjoyed it. The way you wrote Benson and Stabler's partnership was awesome! I'll be watching out for more of your work.

is this the end? u write so well...with humour in bad situations...seriouness in funny times...u should definitely write more

Hi, it's the author... Just wanted to say sorry about the format, how it looks all crowded... I'm new at this, working from a Mac and I had lots of fun trying to transfer it :(