|Reviews for The Dark's Little Inferno|
| Guest 12/30/12 . chapter 4
Please please update, pretty please?
| Cosmyk Angel 11/28/12 . chapter 2
An interesting story twist so far. Just a note, Peverell was the name of the family line with the cloak. I look forward to reading more. I hope you plan to update often.
| Cosmyk Angel 11/28/12 . chapter 1
Interested. I like Hermione. I think she needs to learn that she isn't always the cat's meow, but I like her, given the right situation, she could be a very useful ally for Harry. I wouldn't mind seeing her get together with Krum. I am glad you are shipping Harry/Ginny, I don't read fics with those two in any other pairing.
| Lupinesence 10/7/12 . chapter 4
Love your fic so far :)
| Locked Secret Keeper 10/7/12 . chapter 4
Awesome story. Update soon
| SuperHeroFanGurl 10/6/12 . chapter 4
I love this story! But I just thought I'd point out one thing, sorry if I annoy you by doing this: Where you say that Harry is the heir to Morgana... well the thing is... her last name (in the legends of course) was Le Fay, so... yeah, it just sounds a bit weird where you have 'Morgana' as one of his last names...
Hope I'm not being a bother, just want to help! Keep up the good work! :)
| Cartman1701 10/6/12 . chapter 4
The discussion with Aunt Muriel and Ginny was a nice interesting twist. I look forward to more of this. Nice update.
| Cartman1701 9/23/12 . chapter 3
This is a fun story. Very cute and amusing between Harry and Ginny. Are you going to show the years at Duramstrang or just jump ahead to tri wizard? PLEASE stop putting AN within the story, very distracting. Put them at the beginning or the end of the story.
| GWPotter 9/23/12 . chapter 3
You definitely need a Beta but i like your story so far...Hope you keep going and good luck.
| Pheobe Arocis 9/23/12 . chapter 3
This is great! Please update soon!
| Nessa2685 6/29/12 . chapter 2
That trunk is so cool!
Poat more soon, please!
| The.Don.Vinnie.D 6/5/12 . chapter 2
Long chapters... GOOD! You could split them in half and still be ahead of the curve.
For someone with no beta, I think you did well. Very few spelling issues.
I think you have dyslexia (like me) because it is Peverell LOL
Good plot, so keep writing. I was very happy with your work.
| NTA FANFIC 6/4/12 . chapter 2
i like this
| IceFire9 12/5/11 . chapter 1
I like your story for the most part, but you've really hit on a pet peeve of mine. Don't include things in parenthesese in the middle of a chapter. Particularly if you are describing something using an example from another book, tv show, movie, etc.
Doing this cuts away from the story and ruins the effect of whatever you were describing (Imagine what it would be like if J.K Rowling added in the middle of the Half Blood Prince "(So basically Horcruxes are a lot like the One Ring from the Lord of the Rings)" or something like that.
Its also unhelpfull to anybody who is unfamiliar with the comparison (such as myself, I have never seen Naruto).
If you want to make note of something, or explain your inspiration for something you wrote, put it in an author notes section either at the beginning or end of the chapter.
I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I like the idea you have for your story. However, if you want to keep your readers involved in a story, you shouldn't cut away from your story in the middle of it.