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Dozer
2009-06-21 . chapter 2
Poor Leo must feel like an idiot with that bird. Great story so far. Do you ever plan on finishing it? How is the bird going to ract to the rest of the family? Especialy Kilunk?
Goddess of Idun
2005-12-03 . chapter 2
I have a budgie at home - well, actually it's my sister's budgie - and at first, I was a little afraid of it. After a while, I got used to it and thought that he was cute. Now, he's just annoying.

Poor Leo, I know how it feels to get bitten. And I can understand Donnie too. Good story - it should be updated!
Tewi
2005-10-13 . chapter 2
*snicker snicker* sounds...interesting...please finish!?
beth hart [Leo Oneal]
2005-09-12 . chapter 2
hello
its me again

I LOVE THIS STORY

ASAP PLEASE write chap 3 so i can find out what happens between Leo and that bird

IF YOU WANT TO YOU can have that bird getting loose from its cage and have it attack Leo and Raph in their bedrooms after they go to sleep
Leo Oneal
2004-07-21 . chapter 2
hi its me again =beth= Leonardo is my most fav #1 turtle and i would appreciate it if you would write a new chap to "pollygone" so i can find out what happens between leo & that bird as that bird stays in the lair for the next several weeks/it was hilarious when that bird said screw you to leo & so sweet when it said hello sexy to don/tale good care of yourself & God Bless! = [leo oneal[beth]=shadowsone@webtv.net
Reinbeauchaser
2004-07-20 . chapter 2
Okay, two years? Two years since you last updated? I've heard of writers block before, but -ah - not like this! Well, I'll forgive if only because you gave me such a reason to laugh today.

Loved this little ditty. I've never heard of molly coddling before, so I can safely assume - based on how you used 'holiday' rather than 'vacation' - that it's not an American expression and you're either from the UK or Australia. Either way, love the word!!

Oh, and the bird insulting Leo but then charming Donnie was too perfect. Again, had me rolling off my chair!

Well, you need to try for chapter 3, even if that be the last chapter. Either way, I now have you on my author alert and will be waiting patiently. I figure, the other readers have waited for 2 years, I've only just read this. So, I'm in a better spot, me thinks! :0)

Be blessed.
Lady Dakaina
2003-02-08 . chapter 1
this is cool. more more
Azure Turtle
2002-06-26 . chapter 2
Man, that parrot's evil. I hope Leo doesn't get too close to Jasper again... Onward to the next chapter! =)
RaneyLee - WAS SAILOR VEGETA
2002-06-04 . chapter 2
Poor Leo! I wonder what's going to happen to Raph. Great job. Update soon
Kali Gargoyle
2002-06-03 . chapter 2
LOL! Ooh, poor Leo. I can't wait to see Raph's reaction to Jasper.
Yvette1
2002-05-09 . chapter 1
Oh that was sooo funny! Kudos to Jasper, I'm not too fond of Leo myself. Write more!
Saisei
2002-05-07 . chapter 1
Lol! I feel for Leo. My sister's parrot seems to hate me, and any attempt to get near him can be quite painful. Good job! Get more up soon!
The Great Red Dragon
2002-05-07 . chapter 1
Write more.
Kali Gargoyle
2002-05-06 . chapter 1
Poor Leo. But it's still funny. Heh heh, so much for our "fearless leader".
Machias Banshee
2002-05-05 . chapter 1
LOL!!! I sense impending Doom for poor Leonardo! *EG* Oh, I love the pics you have on your site, as well! Hope to see another chapter soon! *thumbsup*
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