This story sound very good so far, I wonder what will happen next ;- ?

SO GOOD!

wow, thats such a kewl fic

like it lots, keep writing!

Ah, I really like your descriptions. It's so very... Vivid. On a whole, the fic was great, too. Hope you'll be able to write more like this...

wow, I like the way you describe thing so intimetly (sp?). You had no grammar or spelling mistakes and it was written in a readable fashon. I'm liking this story so far, please continue