|Reviews for The family I always needed|
| Jenn520 12/30/11 . chapter 1
This story has a really good idea to it, but I find it hard to read because most of it is he said she said! Try telling who is saying what or doing what more often. It would help greatly. Also, since both George and Rose have powers already in the show, try to be more creative with your powers. Add something different, that's not in the show! Add those things and this story will be great!