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la fleur d'or 4/18/12 . chapter 1
this OMG this is just so delicious and fantastic and omg i love you
Teehee 2/8/12 . chapter 1
MY GOSH O_O i. loved. this. KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
lil joker 1/31/12 . chapter 1
Well thank you...because of this story I had to make up a lie on why my noes was squirting so much blood :**)
YaoiOverlord 1/11/12 . chapter 1
They need to DP him.

Just sayin
Cris UchihaxSasuNaru Freak 12/19/11 . chapter 1
OMG this threesome is the best i have seen in my life

You are a great author thank you for writing this incredible, hot and perfect stories
The Conspicuous Ninja 12/19/11 . chapter 1
I just died.

I give you everything I own, in thanks.
mirrormiror 12/14/11 . chapter 1
Jebus how do you write such hotness?

*blushes*!

:D
Gladioli 12/14/11 . chapter 1
So fucking perfectly hot. B/Light/L, gotta love it. Don't even know how to reply to this but I need to because it's such a good PWP.

Also, LOL. loved your Author note. Don't worry, as far as I can tell, tons of people writing Beyond get the whole eye thing wrong. :-D

and the syrup was awesome! and strawberry flavored 3 nice.
teB360 12/13/11 . chapter 1
Wow, this was really good! I loved the detailing and the dialogue so much. I was absorbed! And I love BxLight. It's hard to find a well written pwp with them both.

Anyway, I learned about this story through tumblr. I'm 13linQ and of course, I follow you! I guess you would have figured that out though, because I like and reblog most of your posts XD

I've got no idea what that 'anon' was going on about, flaming your story. She sounds like she's an uneducated twat!
someonewhoisherebutnothere 12/12/11 . chapter 1
Yes oh dear yes I love this so much!
Wragziez 12/8/11 . chapter 1
Oh f*ck! You have the best smut stories ever! Hope you have more of these fan-f*cking-tastic stories out soon!
a fan 12/7/11 . chapter 1
Omg I think I just died and went to heaven! Hottest death note fanfic I have ever read!
alaine 12/7/11 . chapter 1
wow this is hot

i wonder why rarely anyone never do this pairing
seadoll 12/6/11 . chapter 1
Very nice, B and Light evidently weren't a very-well kept secret. I like the idea of B being L's mad brother; definitely black sheep of the family. _
Lol Bug 12/6/11 . chapter 1
I first saw this on Tumblr, but didn't really know how to comment, so here I am.

Great job! This was absolutely perfect, a wonderful piece, dirty and so totally in character. I felt sorry for Light though, it was as though he was getting raped. That lucky bitch.
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