I like it. :) At first I thought it was Storm, but this was good too.

it was good, but jean? Scott? i could almost see it...oh well. i liked it 10 out of 10.

Interesting. Different.

Wow, I didn't guess either. I actually really thought you were talking about Bloodstorm or something. Although now that I know the truth that "contenders" line really makes sense.

Great work, P!

Jean not becoming Phoenix but something else. Love it.

Oh my Goddess. I never thought it would be her! Sorry folks who real the reviews first to seeif they want to read story(i do that too) You have to read the story to find out who. A story well done. .