This Futuretake/epilogue covering their children lives too was so adorable! I had also missed so much the boys Pov that it being in Jasper's only made it more perfect!

The choice Whitlock-Cullen is pretty cool! Lucky Emma

So adorable the way Bella told the boys about the pregnancy!

just fantastic.

Great story! So sweet!

Sounds crazy, but to bury a career is like a to bury a person for some people and sadly everyone has their own way to mourn.

Nice chapter

That's not an easy situation, but I can't get rid of the impression, that all people are unprepared in this situation, although there was always a chance, that their relationship will become public knowledge. Especially Jasper's PR-people seems to be more than a little bit incompetent. A plan for the worst case should be always available.

Nice chapter

Have just found The Trip Home stories, have been reading chapter after chapter. Absolutely loved them, they are fantastic, thanks for sharing these great stories.

Oh fuck in full blown out tears here thank u for a wonderful story

The Trip Home 1 & 2 & outtakes have been one of my favorite fanfic reading experiences and that is saying a lot. I've read several hundred stories on ff . net and Twilighted and I can truly say I'm sad to have them end. The smut is fun, but the stories meant so much more. I personally am in a quote normal unquote family, but just do not understand why society doesn't just leave the unusual families alone. I would prefer to call them "chosen" families, like you did. They chose to be a family and were no matter what. That is a true family. That is how every family should be in my opinion. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful stories with us. I'm going to try to work throught your whole list of finished works. I rarely review, since I'm not a writer,( I'm too chicken to share anyway) so I feel it's wrong to judge someone else's work. I will tell you if I love something though. I LOVED thes works. Again, Thanks Jennifer Thorn

serious, at the beginning of chapter 5 you say your not going to reveal who Emma's father is? I want to throw my notebook across the room. I mean c'mon! At chapter 5?

I would be reading this story for ever... I love the caracters and their love for each other... Thank you very much for bring them up to us... Kisses

i hadn't realized trip home 2 had been posted, i'm so glad i stumbled upon it tho! really loved the sequel, and the stories in general...love how close they all are! kinda wondering about why they would question emma's dna tho, you mentioned she has green eyes, and isn't that edward's thing?
loved reading, can't wait for more outtakes!

Thank you for this wonderful journey.
I'm looking forward to the outtakes.:)

Hi, I have read all your stories except the one on Hiaties. This story is my favorite. I wished you would have made it longer. You seemed rushed to finish it. But, I still love it.
You an awesome writer and i hope you write more soon. Do you have any books on the way? I would love to read them if you do! If not, you should ! Thank's for sharing you mind with me. Rachell