Good ending.

Fantastic. Nothing more needs to be said. Would truthfully pay for you to re- write the novel by Drew Karpyshyn.

Right, finished. I loved it, from start to finish. For me, THIS is canon.
Looking forward to reading the next two. I hope you finish Disillusionment, but I am not in a rush because I am enjoying the ride.

Some more great dialogue here. After 10 chapters it just gets better and better!

Love it so far, the dialogue feels natural, the characters are behaving in character.

You stated differences with the novel Revan. This is a good thing. Please, please, please don't end the series by bringing it into line with book!

Congratulations

Enjoyed it.

So a trained assassin easily reveals info on his master and the 2 Jedi directly go to Malachor V without any consideration heh :P

This has got to be the best thing I've read in a long time. Truly superb! And a perfect ending...! Very much looking forward to reading Rift now. :)

Now that I've read it all...

I'm just blown away. This is the first fanfic I've ever read, and it gripped me the entire time. I didn't expect that, mostly because of the bad rap fanfic gets. I've read novels (which, by the way, this only misses novel length by a few thousand words) in a day before, but I read this in about 6 hours. That's incredible. I can honestly say this is miles above what Drew Karpyshyn gave us, and that I'm looking forward to reading Rift.

The tension builds...

Just...wow! Very great stuff.

These chapters are doing what they should, which is building the tension. I love it. And if the ending of this chapter is inferring what I think it is, I'm going to love the next chapter.

You've still got me!

One question: Wasn't HK still destroyed at the end of the last chapter? I guess he could've been rebuilt. That kinda stuck out to me.

Nice work!

There were a few sentences I would've wrote differently, but overall it was very great. There were issues (there was an i instead of an I) but you conveyed everything in such a fantastic manner that I was stunned. Quite frankly, this story is gripping me, which is not something I can necessarily say about the Revan novel, where I literally started skipping the Scourge chapters.

I love that you included Nomi and Vima, and I love that you made the council know about their passion! That made my day!

Truthfully, I think this will go better than the Revan novel. I hope I'm right!

Boring? Maybe it's because I'm a fan, but I say: no, it's not. Very interesting on emotional levels, which is what I expected from the title.

All my compliments transcend from the last chapter. You've really got me.

But I don't think you proof-read it as well.

"Insider her" I know that means inside of her, but it really made me stop for a second.

Also, it says "giving her a p" and then stops. I know it was most likely the formatting that did that, but I'd really like to know what that sentence said.

As I've said, stellar work! I'm continuing on from here.

Very nice. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Some parts I loved, and some I really liked. There are flaws, but it's still a well-written first chapter with emotions that work. Personally, what I like the most is how you stayed true to character. These words really are what Bastila and Revan would say.

Stellar job, thus far. I hope it continues.