|Reviews for The Courtship Of Bastila Shan|
| fullhans1 2/21/13 . chapter 15
| KingFlabadingdon 12/12/12 . chapter 1
Fantastic. Nothing more needs to be said. Would truthfully pay for you to re- write the novel by Drew Karpyshyn.
| Glorious 01 12/4/12 . chapter 15
Right, finished. I loved it, from start to finish. For me, THIS is canon.
Looking forward to reading the next two. I hope you finish Disillusionment, but I am not in a rush because I am enjoying the ride.
| Glorious 01 12/3/12 . chapter 10
Some more great dialogue here. After 10 chapters it just gets better and better!
| Glorious 11/30/12 . chapter 1
Love it so far, the dialogue feels natural, the characters are behaving in character.
You stated differences with the novel Revan. This is a good thing. Please, please, please don't end the series by bringing it into line with book!
| Guest 9/17/12 . chapter 15
| Guest 9/11/12 . chapter 15
| Guest 9/11/12 . chapter 10
So a trained assassin easily reveals info on his master and the 2 Jedi directly go to Malachor V without any consideration heh :P
| Cessna 8/13/12 . chapter 15
This has got to be the best thing I've read in a long time. Truly superb! And a perfect ending...! Very much looking forward to reading Rift now. :)
| WriterManfromJCF 8/11/12 . chapter 15
Now that I've read it all...
I'm just blown away. This is the first fanfic I've ever read, and it gripped me the entire time. I didn't expect that, mostly because of the bad rap fanfic gets. I've read novels (which, by the way, this only misses novel length by a few thousand words) in a day before, but I read this in about 6 hours. That's incredible. I can honestly say this is miles above what Drew Karpyshyn gave us, and that I'm looking forward to reading Rift.
| WriterManfromJCF 8/11/12 . chapter 5
The tension builds...
Just...wow! Very great stuff.
These chapters are doing what they should, which is building the tension. I love it. And if the ending of this chapter is inferring what I think it is, I'm going to love the next chapter.
| WriterManfromJCF 8/11/12 . chapter 4
You've still got me!
One question: Wasn't HK still destroyed at the end of the last chapter? I guess he could've been rebuilt. That kinda stuck out to me.
| WriterManfromJCF 8/11/12 . chapter 3
There were a few sentences I would've wrote differently, but overall it was very great. There were issues (there was an i instead of an I) but you conveyed everything in such a fantastic manner that I was stunned. Quite frankly, this story is gripping me, which is not something I can necessarily say about the Revan novel, where I literally started skipping the Scourge chapters.
I love that you included Nomi and Vima, and I love that you made the council know about their passion! That made my day!
Truthfully, I think this will go better than the Revan novel. I hope I'm right!
| WriterManfromJCF 8/11/12 . chapter 2
Boring? Maybe it's because I'm a fan, but I say: no, it's not. Very interesting on emotional levels, which is what I expected from the title.
All my compliments transcend from the last chapter. You've really got me.
But I don't think you proof-read it as well.
"Insider her" I know that means inside of her, but it really made me stop for a second.
Also, it says "giving her a p" and then stops. I know it was most likely the formatting that did that, but I'd really like to know what that sentence said.
As I've said, stellar work! I'm continuing on from here.
| WriterManfromJCF 8/11/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Some parts I loved, and some I really liked. There are flaws, but it's still a well-written first chapter with emotions that work. Personally, what I like the most is how you stayed true to character. These words really are what Bastila and Revan would say.
Stellar job, thus far. I hope it continues.