|Reviews for Baseball, My one and only, or so I think|
| Mikaela Hopeeeeee 5/9/13 . chapter 11
OMG! Please write another one!
| Mrs. Ace Merrill 1/25/13 . chapter 11
I loved this :)
| MissLunaLovegood1999 11/11/12 . chapter 11
| Mrs. StylesCuthbertShelley 10/14/12 . chapter 11
| Dawn the Dark Angel Warrior 9/23/12 . chapter 11
Sequel please! Also I love this story.
| J.E Magic 9/19/12 . chapter 10
Please tell me that's not the end! Please! Please! Please! Tell me that's not the end! There has to be a sequel! You have to make one! You cant just end it like that!
| peperment butler 9/2/12 . chapter 11
ok Jam i want to hear ur ideas
| sweetpdea 9/2/12 . chapter 11
SEQUAL! AND NEW STORY!
| hockeychick19 9/1/12 . chapter 11
i wouldnt mind a sequel but if u wanna do a completely new sandlot story, then do that 2...id read it either way if its about benny
| sweetpdea 8/17/12 . chapter 10
IT CANT BE OVER!1
| hockeychick19 8/16/12 . chapter 10
great story! sad it's over...good job writing it!
| miss.twilightprincess 8/15/12 . chapter 10
Great story. Lov eit all the way. Sa dit ended. Love how Amy writes 'taken by amy' how cute.
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 8
You're pretty on point with spelling and grammar, and what not, but maybe you could make the story a little more in depth? Or descriptive? (Not that your writing now isn't fantastic, just a little improvement) Also, now that Benny and Amy are going out, you should put them in their first date in a bit ;) Maybe a small outing to the diner? Or a date to REAL baseball game together? Or just something romantic, like a night under the stars in the treehouse... (Cheesy enough yet? Lol) Keep in mind: Before you throw in a bunch of conflict, you'll need to make the story seem like everything's going great, and then fill in some plot twisters, which is why I suggest putting in Benny and Amy's first date... The conflict can be between Amy and her mother, or Amy and Lisa and the other girls, or even an internal fight between Benny and Amy! :O haha, surprise me! I also liked one reviewer's suggestion of having Smalls chase after her for a change... I can really see Amy developing a deep friendship with him.
You're doing great so far! Keep up the good work, and don't forget those plot twists! ;) OR that date... I look forward to it! Update soon!
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 9
OHMIGOSH! Okay, you should know right now that I never write reviews, so you should feel very special right now! Haha, but really, this is a great take on the Sandlot story, and I can't describe how happy it makes me that Benny and Amy are FINALLY going out! The story line is very intriguing, and the characters are very... Well, in character! I'd definitely catagorize this story in the...mmmm... Top 5 Sandlot stories :D
My only issues? Just some constructive criticism: You're pretty good with s
| sweetpdea 6/25/12 . chapter 9
lOVE it mor eplease