Absolutely brilliant! :)

I loved the plot and the characters, the fact that you still managed to stick to canon, and your take on the Founders...

Thanks for such a lovely read :)

This was a really gorgeous story. I've loved reading it, and the conclusion was very satisfying. Thank you for sharing.

Marvelous. Such gorgeous writing. You did a superb job world building and melding JKR's world to the one you created. What really got me was the way the Second Hermione and Severus found each other and held on to each other. Beautiful.

*sniffle* It's over... so... awe-inspiring, so repenting and forgiving, so cathartic. Really I think that's the perfect word for your writing, in ever story, and this one especially. You write epic tragedy that resolves into sublime harmony so incredibly, (beyond incredibly), well. It's almost exhausting to read (in a good way) because the story makes you feel all the emotions right along with the characters. Their sadness, their worry, fear, exhaustion, tireless effort and fierce determination against every and anything that dares to stand in their way. I have to sleep now after that amazing adventure but I can hardly wait to read the next of your stories on my list. Don't ever stop writing, you're too good and the world needs more writers like you.

I'm in love with this story! I love the way you write the founders, so... human. I'm torn because I can't stop reading and yet I can't imagine the story ending!

"Severus flinched. Henchmen. He supposed he could be called that, yes. Though he did prefer 'Death Eater' if given the choice."

LOL! Hahahaha! I bet he does! Henchman indeed!

Can't write more, off to read!

This is fascinating! I don't think I've ever read a HG/SS story with a plot like this! It's so intriguing, so.. so.. hm.. I don't think I even have the word to describe my desire to just greedily grasp every word and force them through my brain faster, faster, to see where it goes, where it leads, to find out how this well beyond brilliant story ends! Even typing out this review has made me impatient to get back to reading, so off I go!

Hmmm... curiouser and curiouser... me thinks all is not what it seems... :-)

Wow, I'm already struck by this story. So intricate, weaving the distant past, recent past and present (what I assume it is anyway). I'm extremely intrigued to see how you thread it all together and see where it goes! Off to keep reading now!

This was a brilliant story! I was completely entranced the entire way through. I absolutely love the idea, and how you were able to bring in the 4 founders in such a cool, awe inspiring, and magically way. Great job on this story!

A lovely story - I really enjoyed your imagery.

That was beautiful. Utterly beautiful. It was an orginal way to write an unoriginal plot, and you did it extremely well, making it throughly enjoyable and touching. I loved the last few paragraphs. I loved the way that you pointed out all of Dumbledore's faults because people often leave them out even through they should be adressed. It was wonderful.

What? It's over? Nooooooooooo! But I gotta hand it to you, SLAM Lily, SLAM. If I hadn't been at work, I'd have been dancing about like a goon.

Wow. This was a very powerful story, not just in the way it was told, but particularly in the message it holds for us all. Of course, in my experience with your writing that's the norm, not the exception. Thank you for sharing your vision with us.

A huge thank you as well to all the members of your team. Brava!

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Woo hoo! What a fabulous ending chapter. I was really freaking out at the beginning (alongside Hermione) wondering what Severus would do if he came upon Lily, matured with no James Potter lurking in the background.

Thank goodness Sev had the common sense to make the logical choice...

I love how you ended it, as well, with our heroes stepping out to plant seeds of reconciliation and hope. It is lovely.

I hope you find yourself inspired by something else soon! I so enjoy reading your work.