pretty good, i must say. half of her seemed sad to let David go, yet the other seemed glad to let him go. she sound as if she's half evil all the way, and yet deep down inside, at your last line "I am so sorry", it showed that she loved David very, very much. good work. keep it up!

Wow, that was powerful. I couldn't even imagine being a mother in that position. At the end you were using dramatic iorny? Or was that just to stop thinking about David? Anyway well done.

WHY?That was sad WHY?She just couldn't love David I'm going to go cry.

P.S.It was good.

Really beautiful, but very dark and sad, reflective, and wonderfully written! I love what you did with the subject, and it is very good! :)

ooooooh...that's really chilling...but so well-written!

Whoa. This is a good example of "less is more". You've said a lot in less than 500 word! I'm impressed.

*shiver* Ooooohhhhhhh... obsessive and chilling. The twist at the end was utterly unexpected.

Since you don't have contact info on your info page, Delia, I'll let you know here that I'm going to link to this story from my A.I. site http:/www.cybcity.com/gigolojoe - look for the link in the Fan Fiction section.