Wow. This is amazing. You should really consider a career in writing for the screen. Seriously.

I hope to see more work from you in the future.

Wow I am impressed, this was beautifully done. I hope this will be continued with a few more acts.

Oh, this was a wonderful reproduction of Darkest Hour! I hope you continue this in the same strain, it would make a great read. :) Your character portrayals are perfect - looking forward to this one, along with Jesse's Story!

I really enjoyed reading this. I love the script style of writing and maybe you should write a few more scenes.

xx Fox

This is really good can't wait to read your next story! :)