Oh wow! I found this story through TvTropes, and I'm not regretting it. I like how you tied all the way back to Wind Waker with your logbooks. I like how you're doing the land-bound accents, too. Makes reading it a little challenging, but I'm catching on as I read. Loving Cale. Is Line the descendant of Linebeck? Just guessing, but it does make sense.

Awesome chapter, as usual :) I wanted to get to it sooner, but I didn't have the time :c

Da da da daaaaa, You got a wooden shield!

Don't knock the corner trick too much, Link. It worked wonders for your predecessors (at least in my play-throughs).
Another great chapter. Nice to see link finally doing some dungeon-crawling!

I wonder what's going on in the Forest Temple and how is Line and Zelda doing? I hope they're okay. I wish them luck on the temple and hopefully find the way of finding Link's ship so they can get back home.

I wish you luck on the next chp:D

Have I mentioned how much I love your story, because if not I will say it now; I LOVE your story, it is one of ny favorite storys, even more so because it is a part of the Adlut Time Line.

Alright, so the crew get a breather before plunging into their first dungeon/temple.
It will be interesting to see how you handle the dungeons, because they're a huge portion of the game, but the literal gameplay is often dull to read.
And limited game physics is limited.

Ah, nice! I just love all the banter, you do it marvelously.

-Aila

Been a long time since I read or reviewed anything. Link has taken multiple levels in badass just from fighting a few (lot) of skulltulas :) By the way a few chapters back, you described a royal engineer that was wearing the hero clothes. Was that who I think he was?

Well, isn't this exciting!

In the first chapters, this sounded like a buckle-swashing, round-about novelization of "Spirit Tracks", but once Link hit rock-bottom (literally I mean) I really felt this story go into unexplored territory (which is ironically the known world).

Nervous Link amuses me.

I found Meilont constantly telling Link to forget about returning and attempting the impossible sounded almost nefarious (or at least ruthlessly dismissive).
It makes sense in context, Link is rather on the edge from all the stress and whatshername doesn't really want to lose him.
But I was actively cheering against that girl, no matter how well meaning she was being.

Yeah Link is okay. Man, I have never thought that Lost Woods would be that dangerous.

I wonder what they are looking for in the temple? I hope clues that could lead them to Zelda and Link's crew.

Can't wait for more.

Oh, wow! I love your characterization of Link, it's just perfect. And that bit about the others being nervous and thus making him nervous? So in-character. Great action scene, and I also liked how you used the Lost Woods design from Ocarina, but mixed it with the Spirit Tracks from SP. (I haven't actually played SP, so I don't know if that's the way the Lost Woods, if there are any, are structured or not, but I assume not.)
Great chapter!

-Aila

Yeah, new chapter. It was good. Can't think of anything I can critize.

You know, a great thing about this story is that it seems like it completely belongs in the Zelda universe. I feel like you're making a fan fiction of an actual Zelda game that has yet to be released. The general mood feels very authentic, both to the series and to the time period it's set it, which I would assume to be very hard to accomplish since Spirit Tracks is a mix of so many different eras plus the fantasy elements. Very well done indeed.

OH secrets are revealing themselves to him. I wonder what's going now and what are they up to? Can't wait for more please continue:D