|Reviews for The One That Never Was Book One|
| Angie's Twilight 4/27/13 . chapter 89
It's getting interesting! Off to read more!
| Angie's Twilight 4/27/13 . chapter 73
There is still a lot unresolved between Edward and Bella. And what about Paul? I know Jacob was trying to be honest, but he's kind of gotten on my nerves though I don't know why...
| Angie's Twilight 4/27/13 . chapter 66
This is a really good story so far, and you're a fantastic writer :) I really hope Bella isn't buying Edward's bullshit excuses because I'm not... I guess I have to read more to find out
| angel1215 1/18/13 . chapter 99
It's so sad. Tears! And, more tears. I feel so sorry for both of them. I still say she should have talked w/him before she left. Now what happens? Can't wait to see. I hope it won't be too sad.
| angel1215 1/18/13 . chapter 96
Looking forward to Edward's point of view.
| angel1215 1/18/13 . chapter 90
"Never believe anything you hear and, only half of what you see". That's an old saying my Mom told me once. Anyway, Bella should have talked w/Edward to hear his version before she made any rash decisions. Sometimes things aren't always what they seem even though it may look really bad. And Angela putting her two cents worth in just fueled B's anger. I think E's used to being a flirt and loves the attention. That doesn't mean he's using B and doesn't care about her. I hope B doesn't regret this. Love this story.
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 65
he is an asshole being deliberately obtuse
answering questions with questions
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 63
if these two dont talk about something real im going to scream!
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 62
she better tell him she had to take the plan b
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 56
oh great not only did she not say no - she's unprotected from the manwhore - great just great
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 55
i feel sick
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 54
tell him to stop now bella
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 52
oh please no dont
| MsLiss 1/4/13 . chapter 51
oh please dont just no
| Kelli Rose 828 11/25/12 . chapter 99
I absolutely love your writing. I just discovered your stories- how can that be?
i have to say, I adored your random tidbits about yourself. I didn't find them detracting from the story at all! Don't listen to those who complain. In my opinion, writing is truly an art that takes talent and a very, very personal thing. Just by putting it here on ffn, I have learned people assume they have every right to criticize without taking into consideration there is a person on the other end. The Internet is like that- and I believe these people to be cowards hiding behind a computer.
That said, your writing is amazing, your stories are wonderful & in my opinion, you ought to be published. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent! Off to read EPOV. Can't wait!
P.S. My random #: I loved calculus! Diff EQ was my favorite math, I actually have a math minor and became a structural engineer in my last life before kiddos. I always sucked at humanities, English & writing, unless its a technical report. Too math minded I suppose. Wish I had 1/2 your talent!