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Reviews for: Captain Proton to the Rescue
Reggie 6/1/02 . chapter 1
Cute story! I liked it!
Lorna 5/8/02 . chapter 1
Another lovely story!
Angeles Erare 5/8/02 . chapter 1
It's a cute story... I like it a lot! Nothing to comment on, just telling you to keep writing! You're an amazing writer!
Altra Palantir 5/7/02 . chapter 1
Oh! I like it!
Tha1n0nlYVoyGirl 5/6/02 . chapter 1
Good story!

Cpt Proton stories isn't something you see every day...

Very nice!

You've got a very good writing style and I hope to see more stories from you!

Keep writing!
Pennhothwen 5/6/02 . chapter 1
Cute. :)

Good description too, I liked the story. My only suggestion is that you put "Paris, T." in the Char:1 field, under Edit Story Properties. And perhaps "Kim, H." in Char:2? :) Just a suggestion. I hope there will be more of this! -P
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